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everartz's picture
everartz
7611 pencils

it needs a better art direction, thats for sure...
at least to save it!

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ibrahim-barakat's picture
ibrahim-barakat
20 pencils

Please indicate weaknesses in the art direction

morse's picture
morse
16530 pencils

Very poor art.

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ibrahim-barakat's picture
ibrahim-barakat
20 pencils

Please indicate weaknesses in the art direction

lessismore's picture
lessismore
251 pencils

there's no need to argue if you don't see it…

Molecule's picture
Molecule
437 pencils

the wheel looks like it blends in with the background, blurry. I don't get why there is a chunk of the tire missing, and why the outlines are underneath the wheel as if the wheel literally crushed them

luispiter's picture
luispiter
2756 pencils

bad

bitebrands's picture
bitebrands
36 pencils

a wheel kills children ??

manumartin5's picture
manumartin5
1202 pencils

i thought its about road accidents...

Nude Copy's picture
Nude Copy
1058 pencils

the only thing i could infer from the use of wheel in this ad is that it is supposed to serve as a wreath to the dead people. Road awareness campaigns can be done far better. this is rookie stuff

jhicken's picture
jhicken
52 pencils

Geez guys, the concept isn't that difficult to understand. Poor tire maintenance can lead to traffic accidents.

guvjim's picture
guvjim
14 pencils

The concept is not obvious and the art is pretty bad... The missing chunk is very misleading... poor maintenance wouldn't create a perfect cut like the one shown

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