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Guest's picture
Guest

good idea..., need more study.. good luck

Adaddicted's picture
Adaddicted
Activity Score 3435

Good idea, better attempt for a student. No comment on the Art!

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thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
Activity Score 224

thx you

=]

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jbuckingham
Activity Score 901

Quite like it

Hiperion's picture
Hiperion
Activity Score 3138

Good work for a student

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kate bulock
Activity Score 11

Nice one for students

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Muhammad Imran
Activity Score 616

Correct their effort rather just saying its a good idea isn't enough guys...

Here we go one by one, I pointed out few mistakes here,
1- Reflection of the cloudy sky shouldn't be appear on windows or any other shiny surface if you are using the simple ground.
2- Shadow is too Dark
3- Never use the car reflection if you doesn't have the actual in the photo it self, reason because you cant see the under knee area of the car, its seems pretty unreal... as you can see clearly in this image there is no under knee detail of this car.

Good Luck next time and be aware, start observing things your own self if you want to create a great piece of art.

thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
Activity Score 224

thank you, I'll fix

it :)

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bknowlden
Activity Score 3647

Nice piece for a professional, great work for a student.

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royschellekens
Activity Score 390

I like the idea. The execution is poor. But that's the reality for a student. With a paying client and a good photographer this would make a great ad!

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thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
Activity Score 224

I have 1 year before I'm going to graduate. And I'm looking forward to work in advertising agency, so portfolio is necessary. I started from now on with no stop.

Thanks for your good comments, guys :)

federo's picture
federo
Activity Score 781

LOVE THIS AD

thedesignaddict's picture
thedesignaddict
Activity Score 5403

Brilliant idea, but he execution needs a lot of work.

thedesignaddict's picture
thedesignaddict
Activity Score 5403

Brilliant idea, but the execution needs a lot of work.

thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
Activity Score 224

I'm trying

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everartz's picture
everartz
Activity Score 7609

good idea but the artwork is too bad

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thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
Activity Score 224

too bad?

thx, later I'll try harder.

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baygolge
Activity Score 7

good idea

aaaron's picture
aaaron
Activity Score 103

Student??? WELL DONE GUYS!!!!!!!!

advocate's picture
advocate
Activity Score 268

...please try harder more battle to come

Guest's picture
Guest

good idea..., need more study.. good luck

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