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Adaddicted's picture
Adaddicted
3435 pencils

Good idea, better attempt for a student. No comment on the Art!

withalltherespects

thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
224 pencils

thx you

=]

jbuckingham's picture
jbuckingham
775 pencils

Quite like it

Hiperion's picture
Hiperion
3138 pencils

Good work for a student

kate bulock's picture
kate bulock
11 pencils

Nice one for students

Muhammad Imran's picture
Muhammad Imran
614 pencils

Correct their effort rather just saying its a good idea isn't enough guys...

Here we go one by one, I pointed out few mistakes here,
1- Reflection of the cloudy sky shouldn't be appear on windows or any other shiny surface if you are using the simple ground.
2- Shadow is too Dark
3- Never use the car reflection if you doesn't have the actual in the photo it self, reason because you cant see the under knee area of the car, its seems pretty unreal... as you can see clearly in this image there is no under knee detail of this car.

Good Luck next time and be aware, start observing things your own self if you want to create a great piece of art.

thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
224 pencils

thank you, I'll fix

it :)

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
3647 pencils

Nice piece for a professional, great work for a student.

royschellekens's picture
royschellekens
390 pencils

I like the idea. The execution is poor. But that's the reality for a student. With a paying client and a good photographer this would make a great ad!

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thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
224 pencils

I have 1 year before I'm going to graduate. And I'm looking forward to work in advertising agency, so portfolio is necessary. I started from now on with no stop.

Thanks for your good comments, guys :)

federo's picture
federo
781 pencils

LOVE THIS AD

thedesignaddict's picture
thedesignaddict
5393 pencils

Brilliant idea, but he execution needs a lot of work.

thedesignaddict's picture
thedesignaddict
5393 pencils

Brilliant idea, but the execution needs a lot of work.

thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
224 pencils

I'm trying

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everartz's picture
everartz
7611 pencils

good idea but the artwork is too bad

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thaistylez's picture
thaistylez
224 pencils

too bad?

thx, later I'll try harder.

baygolge's picture
baygolge
7 pencils

good idea

aaaron's picture
aaaron
103 pencils

Student??? WELL DONE GUYS!!!!!!!!

advocate's picture
advocate
268 pencils

...please try harder more battle to come

Guest's picture
Guest

good idea..., need more study.. good luck

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