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AdaddictedMonday, March 15, 2010 - 02:41

Good idea, better attempt for a student. No comment on the Art!

withalltherespects

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thaistylezMonday, March 15, 2010 - 04:50

thx you

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jbuckinghamMonday, March 15, 2010 - 05:26

Quite like it

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HiperionMonday, March 15, 2010 - 07:03

Good work for a student

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kate bulockMonday, March 15, 2010 - 10:38

Nice one for students

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Muhammad ImranMonday, March 15, 2010 - 12:34

Correct their effort rather just saying its a good idea isn't enough guys...

Here we go one by one, I pointed out few mistakes here,
1- Reflection of the cloudy sky shouldn't be appear on windows or any other shiny surface if you are using the simple ground.
2- Shadow is too Dark
3- Never use the car reflection if you doesn't have the actual in the photo it self, reason because you cant see the under knee area of the car, its seems pretty unreal... as you can see clearly in this image there is no under knee detail of this car.

Good Luck next time and be aware, start observing things your own self if you want to create a great piece of art.

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thaistylezMonday, March 15, 2010 - 13:05

thank you, I'll fix

it :)

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bknowldenMonday, March 15, 2010 - 15:06

Nice piece for a professional, great work for a student.

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brandon

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royschellekensMonday, March 15, 2010 - 16:05

I like the idea. The execution is poor. But that's the reality for a student. With a paying client and a good photographer this would make a great ad!

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thaistylezMonday, March 15, 2010 - 16:56

I have 1 year before I'm going to graduate. And I'm looking forward to work in advertising agency, so portfolio is necessary. I started from now on with no stop.

Thanks for your good comments, guys :)

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federoMonday, March 15, 2010 - 17:21

LOVE THIS AD

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thedesignaddictTuesday, March 16, 2010 - 05:35

Brilliant idea, but he execution needs a lot of work.

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thedesignaddictTuesday, March 16, 2010 - 05:35

Brilliant idea, but the execution needs a lot of work.

thaistylez's picture
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thaistylezTuesday, March 16, 2010 - 05:55

I'm trying

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everartzTuesday, March 16, 2010 - 18:22

good idea but the artwork is too bad

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thaistylez's picture
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thaistylezTuesday, March 16, 2010 - 19:51

too bad?

thx, later I'll try harder.

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baygolgeWednesday, March 17, 2010 - 09:08

good idea

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aaaronTuesday, March 30, 2010 - 06:44

Student??? WELL DONE GUYS!!!!!!!!

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advocateSaturday, April 3, 2010 - 16:56

...please try harder more battle to come

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GuestThursday, July 1, 2010 - 22:29

good idea..., need more study.. good luck