Mr. Unlock: Door
Advertising School: Burapha University, Bangsaen Thailand
Art Director / Photographer: Sirachaikij Narktong
Advertising School: Burapha University, Bangsaen Thailand
Art Director / Photographer: Sirachaikij Narktong
20 comments
Good idea, better attempt for a student. No comment on the Art!
withalltherespects
thx you
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Quite like it
Good work for a student
Nice one for students
Correct their effort rather just saying its a good idea isn't enough guys...
Here we go one by one, I pointed out few mistakes here,
1- Reflection of the cloudy sky shouldn't be appear on windows or any other shiny surface if you are using the simple ground.
2- Shadow is too Dark
3- Never use the car reflection if you doesn't have the actual in the photo it self, reason because you cant see the under knee area of the car, its seems pretty unreal... as you can see clearly in this image there is no under knee detail of this car.
Good Luck next time and be aware, start observing things your own self if you want to create a great piece of art.
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thank you, I'll fix
it :)
Nice piece for a professional, great work for a student.
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brandon
www.brandonknowlden.com
I like the idea. The execution is poor. But that's the reality for a student. With a paying client and a good photographer this would make a great ad!
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I have 1 year before I'm going to graduate. And I'm looking forward to work in advertising agency, so portfolio is necessary. I started from now on with no stop.
Thanks for your good comments, guys :)
LOVE THIS AD
Brilliant idea, but he execution needs a lot of work.
Brilliant idea, but the execution needs a lot of work.
I'm trying
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good idea but the artwork is too bad
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too bad?
thx, later I'll try harder.
good idea
Student??? WELL DONE GUYS!!!!!!!!
...please try harder more battle to come
good idea..., need more study.. good luck