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I like that it's a sketch, that it's not too slick. That's how ideas are born, in the artist's notebook. Agree with the drop shadow comments, but prefer to focus on the concept--a good one (in my book 8-} )

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i've got 1:1 the same idea in my portfolio

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Jet Propulsion Lab
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I suppose this assignmnt was part of an advertising student competition this year. Because I saw an almost-exact same idea/execution for this "client" done by a team from the Academy of Art College in San Franicsco. I saw it in the current issue of Creativity magazine. Only their version had no drawing of a laptop in the notebook. It was only suggested by the way it was opened. And had a simple copy that read "Never crashes." I much prefer theirs to this one we see here. It was better shot as well...

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Bacon Face's picture
Bacon Face
Activity Score 107

can be better

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Unmotivated Genius
Activity Score 100

agreed... the idea it there but the execution is lacking

just write's picture
just write
Activity Score 653

Idea is very decent... interesting...

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Guest

Nice idea. I like it. But please don't use the standard drop shadow tool it kills your execution.

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Guest

Nice ide. I like it. But please don't use the standard drop shadow tool.

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everartz
Activity Score 7609

i cant believe they've dropped a shadow behind the book's "screen" side!!! this tells me that either they are apprentices or the idea is a rip off!

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CurryJ
Activity Score 955

So what's the thinking behind the headline 'Start'?

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I think; therefore I am

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Guest

the thinking is that these journals are used to jot down ideas for people's future. start your sculpture, start your screenplay, whatever. also, i saw the moleskine campaign that won the competition. we didnt know about that or else we would have entered into it, but i like ours because it plays to the creative class of people. they position theirs as a regular notebook, it's not. not to us anyway.

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blacksmurf
Activity Score 200

nice idea, bad execution.

easy to say "art director".

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Guest

I like that it's a sketch, that it's not too slick. That's how ideas are born, in the artist's notebook. Agree with the drop shadow comments, but prefer to focus on the concept--a good one (in my book 8-} )

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