Mint Z: Totem
Average: 8 (45 votes)

Improved chewing skill

Advertising Agency: Creative Juice, Indonesia
Chief Creative Officer: Thirasak Tanapatanakul
Creative Director: Wahyu Kentjana
Art Director: Richard Atmadja
Copywriter: Desy Olivya
Graphic Designers: Dewi Simanjuntak, Yusuf Wahyudi, Endra Nur
Photographer: Artli Ali / Anka!
Published: December 2010

15 comments

JKW's picture
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JKW

The better of the three...

JeffGreenhouse's picture
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JeffGreenhouse

Cute. Seems like the trend is to make the copy smaller and smaller and smaller. This one's almost invisible, but at least the visual is so clean that you can spot it and get the whole point.

naughtsoofamous's picture
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naughtsoofamous

Too clever. Good execution though.

barcreativo.com's picture
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barcreativo.com

interesting.. i like it

kleenex's picture
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kleenex

Not bad, but not great.

mr.x's picture
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mr.x

I agree. What is up with the micro-copy? Good idea though.

Roger Keynes's picture
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Roger Keynes

Took a minute... but it got me in.
I love ads that can do that.

Will Think for Salary

vandervader's picture
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vandervader

this one is the best of the three.

shahidali's picture
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shahidali

Like the simplicity of the idea. Wonder how would it have looked had it been kept raw (the way it gets after real chewing). Would the TG connect better?

shahid

jackblack's picture
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jackblack

Funny. But I couldnt' read the payoff or make out the logo.

Sdb's picture
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Sdb

lovely

CuriousPencil's picture
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CuriousPencil

"Chewing skill" is important if you're a child moving to solid food from milk. Chewing as an adult is not a skill. This campaign smacks of desperation, like some client wanting to launch a Hubba Bubba competition to blow the biggest bubble, without the product to back it up.

Gonna mark this down to LostInTranslation. Otherwise it's a whole generation of gullibility, and I'm not quite ready for that just yet.

fotdot's picture
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fotdot

Wow. I really need my grandpa glasses. Cannot read. Not good for this ad.

the_lizard_king's picture
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the_lizard_king

Nice concept... A bit stretched but goes with the personality of the product. Great work

And then GOD said...
Let there be creativity!!!

kondensofke's picture
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kondensofke

haha, loved it