Mini: Comic

Advertising Agency: Metzler : Vater Communication Group, Munich, Germany

Illustrator: Lilian Neunhoeffer

March 2012


kgeiger's picture
7287 pencils

Nice illustrations, but it's all too clear why no copywriter is listed in the credits.

MicheleVirgilio's picture
2617 pencils

nice work. not so clear but i think works

Wordfruit's picture
1023 pencils

I guess the pure fact that it's a comic and so different graphically to other supplements etc will mean people will notice it.

But I'd also guess it'll restrict readership -- lots of people simply don't read comics.

I read the first bit and the copy seemed to be comic-style. I think what would have got my attention would be if the copy was not comic-style.

I guess the rest depends on how good the story in the comic is. I didn't read it, so I don't know.

Bob08's picture
749 pencils

Never seen so many (small) words in a comic.
I lost the desire to read at the second box.

vote4pedro's picture
4601 pencils

Mini misses Crispin. The old Crispin, anyway.

mois's picture
28 pencils

the direction art is good but all is boring also.

mrcreativerebel's picture
24 pencils

the illustrations are awesome!

kleenex's picture
40662 pencils

nice look for the illustrations.

bate_palmas's picture
1479 pencils

Looks good but waaay too much copy going on here. Got bored after a few seconds

Nomad8's picture
204 pencils

The art is interesting and got my attention but you guys seriously need to read some comics. The content is like a brochure. And surely a plot? Even if this is vol1. or a teaser, even if you don't care about a story, use the time tested comic strategy - "A threat - a hero - a hero in trouble - rise of companions (not compagnons, for god's sake!) - how will it turn out?!!! - wait for the next issue!" Isn't there a writer in the house?

TheWasteBin's picture
108 pencils

Nice art, but nobody's going to stick with this long enough to read it. Got bored after box 2. The copy wasn't engaging. Not too fond of the idea either. Superhero car? Could have done better.

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