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Piddy's picture
Piddy
82 pencils

Just Bitchin

This has been done.

ziadhdn's picture
ziadhdn
104 pencils

I didn't get it, can anybody plesae explain?

ziad hamdan

Saltsea's picture
Saltsea
321 pencils

Change your job.

popdistortion's picture
popdistortion
1594 pencils

Hahaha. You're naughty. I like the simplicity. Good ad.

fotdot's picture
fotdot
673 pencils

Using full stops as stops and analogy for the braking system. Nice thought.

Shut Theory's picture
Shut Theory
515 pencils

where has it been done before? i love it!

http://shut.elmota.com

Tapper's picture
Tapper
490 pencils

This has been done and its a first thought and its so old and its just so ... 'am punching image on screen'

Strip. Strip. Strip.

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
2838 pencils

If you've seen it before, where?

BUGGERS

nizarts's picture
nizarts
18 pencils

Nooooooooooo

jungleraven's picture
jungleraven
291 pencils

done before. but still nice one.

Shut Theory's picture
Shut Theory
515 pencils

urrrgghh, where has it been done before?

http://shut.elmota.com

wgeddes's picture
wgeddes
298 pencils

reminds me of how my mom drives

http://www.freerangerobot.com

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

lol

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

My. Kind. Of. Copy.
Thoughts? Hangman?

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

hang-the-dj's picture
hang-the-dj
1262 pencils

Ha ha.
Yeah.
Have done this myself.
For public transport (trains).
(are.you.sick.of.stopping.and.starting?)
Don't think client got it.
Never ran.

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

Did you present it, Hangman?
Or was it left to the (mercy of the) suits?

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

hang-the-dj's picture
hang-the-dj
1262 pencils

Yeah, got presented.

Though I discovered my colleague had done the exact same thing for the same client before (and they rejected it the first time too).

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

Same idea, twice? Ouch!
I try and present my own stuff...
unless the suit really 'gets it'.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

hang-the-dj's picture
hang-the-dj
1262 pencils

I really wasn't that phased.

Ended up getting some pretty cool outdoor lines approved in the end.

That was a client who often made us re-brief, then re-brief and then...you get the picture, until all great/good/decent ideas were exhausted.

It was not unusual to show them stuff twice, sometimes they even bought it the second time 'round.

Present all my own stuff now though (smaller agency)

Lorem Ipsum's picture
Lorem Ipsum
49 pencils

was done in the comments section months ago!

http://adsoftheworld.com/media/online/dhl_all_the_way

HV's picture
HV
212 pencils

haha, true endeed. Did it ever run as an ad?

I quite like this oldschool copy approach!

pixelbomb1's picture
pixelbomb1
2555 pencils

funny thing is that you actually STOP. when reading this. i guess traffic is pretty bad in that area.

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pinkusfloydus's picture
pinkusfloydus
90 pencils

Been done before. For Volkswagen, in Singapore.

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

I am rediscovering the joy of the clever copy headline ad.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

truecopy's picture
truecopy
400 pencils

Nice one.

"Sex sells. Truth even better." - A friend

vanburnvinit's picture
vanburnvinit
70 pencils

i like this, done or not b4.

sergiolobo's picture
sergiolobo
10 pencils

This has been done.

mrtalented's picture
mrtalented
2175 pencils

the headline should be longer so that you'll be more irritated and curious. and the product name BAS PLUS should be moved to the bottom right. so the headline can work to its maximum effect.

Have Heart's picture
Have Heart
922 pencils

Shouldn't it be "breaking" instead of "braking"?!

saymawa's picture
saymawa
46 pencils

Are you. Serious?

Sylvio R.'s picture
Sylvio R.

Haha! If it was a "breaking" system, nobody would buy it.

simphiwe mdhluli's picture
simphiwe mdhluli
11 pencils

HALA PPZ...DIS IZ KWL

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