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pez's picture
pez
1800 pencils

jajaja! i love this! :)

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Guest

I don't like that illustration. Way too emo and dark. teenage stuff.

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Guest

oooohhhh so boooorinnnnggggg.. (nice illustration)

Zulu-1's picture
Zulu-1
130 pencils

Fun! lol.

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rurorjuror
745 pencils

:)

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benihana77
86 pencils

I think the illustration is actually kind of nice, since they might be trying to access a slightly younger audience (Mentos kind of screams "25+" to me, though I've always liked them).

I think the ad is kind of cool, though oddly spaced. I love me some white, negative space, but they haven't really activated all of it. That right corner is just a giant wad of dead space. Surely they could have extended the illustrations ever so slightly to make it have more impact. A clock maybe. Or maybe just the corner of his desk, with the stapler on it. That'd be kind of funny.

That being said, the concept is cute, but it feels like they're just trying to creepy away from what would have otherwise been the obvious, and done-before (by them!) punchline: that the guy getting fired doesn't care, because he has Mentos to chew! Still, since it's a variation of the traditional product, it's kind of cool.

I think if they just fine tune the copy and treatment a little to make it a meatier concept, it could be a great campaign.

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Guest

If i had that stapler, i would staple your fingers together! Man, how much will you write!
If only the perfect was beautiful no one would have loved he pisa. Its oddity, is its charm.

Good Work Guys!

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Gualcor
978 pencils

Simón, qué emo jaja

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Eliane29
53 pencils

Very nice illustration, and kind of funny!

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CommandZ's picture
CommandZ
2494 pencils

Nice delivery on the selfless without guilt.

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Guest

The typical case "This illustration was already done and I put my pack".

I saw those illustrations eras a go.

Djenzie's picture
Djenzie
163 pencils

hahaha love this serie!!

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