Ney Frances's picture
Ney Frances
660 pencils

this is the only good line of the campaign, but the illustrations are great! shame that the ¨reason why¨ is their concept!

is there life before death?

purplesimon's picture
475 pencils

Copy needs re-working, there is a problem with the tenses employed in this advert.

The copy police strike again!

Sorry, but it does spoil what could have been a good campaign, for me at least.

aadi's picture
230 pencils

I really dont lke the copy

copycomoelcopi's picture
822 pencils

bad copy, baaaaaad copy

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