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Bob.C's picture
Bob.C
Activity Score 1161

I like the premise of this, but the copy feels unfocused and too explanatory - just three paragraphs would have been more effective.

It feels seems like the copywriter didn't edit the first version of the text as there is a lot that simply doesn't work (it's an honest mistake, at some point etc).

Kriativity's picture
Kriativity
Activity Score 416

okay okay..

ace85le's picture
ace85le
Activity Score 3939

this whole campaign sucks.

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Bob.C's picture
Bob.C
Activity Score 1161

I like the premise of this, but the copy feels unfocused and too explanatory - just three paragraphs would have been more effective.

It feels seems like the copywriter didn't edit the first version of the text as there is a lot that simply doesn't work (it's an honest mistake, at some point etc).

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