Marin County Public Schools: Sedans

Advertising Agency: Venables Bell & Partners, USA
Executive Creative Director: Paul Venables
Sr. Art Director: Tavia Holmes
Copywriter: Paul Venables
Production House: XYZ
Print Producer: David Russ
Group Account Director: Erik Petersen
Account Manager: Leigh Davidson

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Kriativity's picture
Kriativity
418 pencils

okay okay..

ace85le's picture
ace85le
3939 pencils

this whole campaign sucks.

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Bob.C
1135 pencils

I like the premise of this, but the copy feels unfocused and too explanatory - just three paragraphs would have been more effective.

It feels seems like the copywriter didn't edit the first version of the text as there is a lot that simply doesn't work (it's an honest mistake, at some point etc).

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