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Boxey's picture
Boxey
Activity Score 8881

copy makes no sense.

Besha's picture
Besha
Activity Score 295

weird!

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475

FIRE THE COPYWRITER. 'MYTH' is being used in accurately. They mean't to write 'legend'

chinaski's picture
chinaski
Activity Score 951

"in accurately"? Hmmm, very ironic.

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PaulyG_fill in ...
Activity Score 1148

my thoughts exactly.

HOLA's picture
HOLA
Activity Score 82

bad retouch. rough and disturbing.
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Simplify.

PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture
PaulyG_fill in ...
Activity Score 1148

um, Marilyn wasn't a myth, she was a legend.

TopJeff's picture
TopJeff
Activity Score 479

Maybe it's a secret message. Maybe there's a conspiracy.... maybe she WAS a myth.

Maybe I need more sleep.

Jeff

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Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475

Fire Michele Pieri!

icvisuals's picture
icvisuals
Activity Score 24

...and Barbara Ghiotti. How did they pitch this to client? and why did the client decide to run these. Not good.

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twelve_noon
Activity Score 617

i wouldn't crucify the idea so fast. I think it's there and links well to the brand. The execution is a bit grotesque makin it ambiguous. It just needed work... As for michele pieri, she's excused... come on guys the idea obviously run in italian press and not everyone's fluent in english. We get the gist of it...

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JamurPutih
Activity Score 263

IMHO,

a myth is something that you don't really sure that it really exists....
a legend is something that is memorable...

if you want to make a copy in english, sure you have to know what to write, right?

end of joy, enjoy

Vicky's picture
Vicky
Activity Score 375

The retouch in Elvis is much better... this looks amateur.

Yokel's picture
Yokel
Activity Score 604

That was Elvis?! Looked more like some little pointy eared goblin

Stigset's picture
Stigset
Activity Score 1454

The retouchng isn't very convincing, but this isn't an agency job, it's just a personnal project, so we shouldn't be so hard on these guys.

Boxey's picture
Boxey
Activity Score 8881

copy makes no sense.

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