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Nthngmn's picture
Nthngmn
626 pencils

boring sector, boring ads

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

i am moved to turn the page. i would never read copy layed out like this, it's all wasted.

oligofree's picture
oligofree
288 pencils

Fuck the copy, fuck the art direction... What a concept :)))
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chintan ruparel's picture
chintan ruparel
1516 pencils

guys..whats wrong wil you'll!!!

these are a rage back home to the target audience...n they're corporate ads for gods sake!
the copy makes super sense n it's hardcore selling with a dash of wit...
c'mon, u've gotta giv it to them...

gr8 job Bates, Mumbai..

evn if d world's being cynical, ther r lots i know who've loved these, keep going..
ppl here r just too spoilt with all-visual-no-word ads which r plain witty n nothing else.

sorry guys, bt advertising isnt only bout selling hot sauce or diet coke, n im saying dis wid a lotta balls.

~ old habits die hard, older ones never do ~

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
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despite the raging passion you are exhibiting, i'm still not moved to read the copy the way it's laid out. it has nothing to do with hot sauce ads or diet coke. it has to do with the way the copy is laid out, it is not an easy read, and i really don't think it's an effective way of displaying copy.

hang-the-dj's picture
hang-the-dj
1262 pencils

This ad looks too boring to read. I wouldn't stop in a newspaper or magazine, so I'm not gonna bother right now...

liar's picture
liar
386 pencils

It just contained too many words which will turn most people off in the first place.

hang-the-dj's picture
hang-the-dj
1262 pencils

Too many words, some kind of math equation and a layout that looks like it belongs on a lecture hall whiteboard.

Sorry to be so negative but there is just so much not to like.

If you're going to do long copy you need sharp, witty writing and interesting visuals. This has neither.

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L.A.lopes4mayor
52 pencils

u'll see these in a usual old layout corporate brochures..zzzzzzzz

jacksonrabbit's picture
jacksonrabbit
290 pencils

Somewhere, Neil French is smiling.

liar's picture
liar
386 pencils

You think he will like this copy?
I thought he resided in Singapore.

me thinks's picture
me thinks
722 pencils

Well done copywriters.

nitigya79's picture
nitigya79
53 pencils

I know most of you fell asleep reading the ads. but then these ads were not made for you. they were made for a specific target audience and worked wonders with them.
if you want to judge ads do judge them by understanding what the brief must have
been.for example the kaminomot campaign by neil french was disliked by me
but worked in its target audience and won loads of awards. so stop commenting just
for the heck of it.

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

how are we supposed to know if you will agree with our comments or not? i can't read your mind i'm afraid, and i'm used to free speech. this is going to be hard.

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