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Dzsoi's picture
Dzsoi
Activity Score 8073

(addressing to dellsheng) I think many creative directors want 2 things from you: good skills as an art director and fresh, good ideas. With this, you are able to show only PS/Indesign/whateverprogram skills. Don't spare the time to come up with a decent, new concept.

brainslashed's picture
brainslashed
Activity Score 32

Can you say done to death?

Adaddicted's picture
Adaddicted
Activity Score 3435

"DONE TO DEATH"

withalltherespects

jorj's picture
jorj
Activity Score 638

yes we can, check my work.

Molecule's picture
Molecule
Activity Score 435

BOoooooOOOring.

DanielDDB's picture
DanielDDB
Activity Score 53

seriously booring

alexander_bickov's picture
alexander_bickov
Activity Score 3279

I agree

ivan's picture
ivan

I hear you guys. Will not post such anymore.

J Designer's picture
J Designer
Activity Score 2420

I don’t think it’s that bad. But as someone else has previously said that perhaps a student section would be good for ads like these so people are more understanding?

dellsheng's picture
dellsheng
Activity Score 21

i made this work,and i agree this is boring.
what i want to show is my Finishing-art ability
I am just a student who is seeking a oppotunity of being a intern at shanghai's 4A advertising agency.
thank for u guy's comments.

Phil Lestino's picture
Phil Lestino
Activity Score 1684

Good for you...I am sure you will get a job...you are brave publishying your work....the most common thing these guys saym is done...but then hasn't everything? Good luck.

Dzsoi's picture
Dzsoi
Activity Score 8073

(addressing to dellsheng) I think many creative directors want 2 things from you: good skills as an art director and fresh, good ideas. With this, you are able to show only PS/Indesign/whateverprogram skills. Don't spare the time to come up with a decent, new concept.

Adaddicted's picture
Adaddicted
Activity Score 3435

... hey, if you had mentioned that you are a student you could certainly have avoided the missiles and arrows here!

withalltherespects

joelapompe's picture
joelapompe
Activity Score 3830

I don't believe my eyes!

Emanresu's picture
Emanresu
Activity Score 2148

I do not read Chinese so I do not know the product and its benefits. I agree with Ivan on the five stars, the concept is very safe and has been done countless times; the foam of a drink giving the form of something to describe the beverage or the liquid itself shaped as a person or thing.

Don't be shy to post a link to your portfolio (if you have one) or the comments you receive on your work after having it reviewed. Best of luck with gaining that internship experience.

lynz's picture
lynz
Activity Score 104

I completely agree with you. I think that the best way to grow is to share your work, and unfortunately people here have just trashed the work and not many have given the reasons why they think it doesn't work. At least you stated as to WHY it doesn't work. Everyone has to start somewhere and I give kudos to him for putting it out there so early on in his career. People just tend to forget what it was like in their first years and just starting out.

I do think that a student section is a great idea, good way to see new talent and for the talent to learn and grow. Good luck to you.

royschellekens's picture
royschellekens
Activity Score 390

Milk should be fresh, not recycled!

http://twitter.com/royschellekens

Hate advertising? Make better ads.

Marlus Lau's picture
Marlus Lau
Activity Score 1808

Dude...if are student, it's ok but, you should practice on this photoshop a little more. It's very unrealistic.

But I believe you can get there!

CharlieBARSTOW's picture
CharlieBARSTOW
Activity Score 31

way to drop the ball Ivan lol

isupsonic's picture
isupsonic
Activity Score 2

我只能说....打开这个页面..我被吓到了...还是国人做的,太丢脸了!!!!!!

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