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andylefty's picture
andylefty
Activity Score 4535

Is this an ad?

It has a headline and tries to be colloquial but the mass of information doesn't flow like long copy needs to.

There's not much of a narrative and no payoff at the end.

Felt like I was reading a hospital pamphlet.

It goes bang bang bang bang. Quite relentless.

Art direction is nice but these little pictures with captions stunt the flow also.

R.C's picture
R.C
Activity Score 55

i was actually happy to finally see a long copy ad.. but this doesn't hold my interest for long..

Dharmesh aka danny's picture
Dharmesh aka danny
Activity Score 334

Yes, I agree with you my friend.

Dharmesh Padia

Dharmesh aka danny's picture
Dharmesh aka danny
Activity Score 334

Very nicely written. It was a good learning again. Long copy ads are almost getting out of the market in India. This is a good piece of art. :)

Dharmesh Padia

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Milan Solanki
Activity Score 994

it is good, only for those who spare time to read it..
of course, sure as hell long copy ads cant stand against short copy ads

andylefty's picture
andylefty
Activity Score 4535

Is this an ad?

It has a headline and tries to be colloquial but the mass of information doesn't flow like long copy needs to.

There's not much of a narrative and no payoff at the end.

Felt like I was reading a hospital pamphlet.

It goes bang bang bang bang. Quite relentless.

Art direction is nice but these little pictures with captions stunt the flow also.

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