Lenovo: For those who do, 5

That line's not quite there.
'We make them so. You make them do.' ?
The 'tools' - 'do' thing isn't working for me.

Someone did this ad

not great, but not bad.

not great at all

need more work.

Agreed needs to be finished.

Art Buyer credit. Art Buyer?!

The headline would make a decent strategy. Now all they need is a concept.

hmm so and so ad

Keep making the tools. Find someone else to make the ads.

Couldn't have said it better myself Spanky.

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I presume Lenovo makes physical tools or software, but I don't think it's clear.

And I don't know specifically what you can do to help me or whether the product is relevant to me -- I don't think that's clear.

And, assuming you make tools... I need to "make them do"...? That could kind of communicate "I make do with them" -- which would mean they are crap tools...

"We Make The Tools. You Make Them... Work?" sounds like a much better headline

Not very good.

i don't understand this