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CuriousPencilSunday, July 17, 2011 - 10:45

I suppose it's meant to be funny, is it?

Is it?

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morseSunday, July 17, 2011 - 10:46

I think it's funny and surely communicates that you get the best of food.

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ShawaliSunday, July 17, 2011 - 10:58

Tempus alert!! Abort! Abort!

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

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atb2005Sunday, July 17, 2011 - 13:38

Is Barry Flanik the agency's intern? The copy is beyond silly, unless children are the TA.

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BilloughsbySunday, July 17, 2011 - 15:27

No, it's not, Curious (saw the conclusion coming from the first sentence), and yes it is, atb (children's bookish, and for why, one person on earth may know).

"Ubi hubave lubearned thubat ubanuby fubool cuban wrubite uba bubad ubad, bubut thubat ubit tubakes uba rubeal gubenubiubus tubo kubeep hubis hubands uboff uba gubood ubone."
-Lubeo Buburnubett

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BoxeyTuesday, July 19, 2011 - 13:40

+1

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sakshi.89mahajanMonday, July 18, 2011 - 01:57

its way kiddish !!!

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ace85leMonday, July 18, 2011 - 05:51

It's not working at all. Funny??? No way. More of teaching children animal cruelty by shattering their hopes & dreams lolz.

Total fail.

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kleenexMonday, July 18, 2011 - 12:45

Yes I do think it is kiddish, but I like the idea though.

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ThisGuyMonday, July 18, 2011 - 12:51

Is that Papyrus? Icky.

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RotzgohtTuesday, July 19, 2011 - 03:30

It's a shame these stories seem derivative. I gotta admit, I liked the salmon story. That one had the best ending. It somehow avoided the dream-crushing cruelty perceived by some readers, and definitely focused on the "best" and "fresh" aspect perceived by others.

It almost seems like they wrote that salmon Ad first; the other two, not nearly as well written. Oh well.

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dean viiiTuesday, July 19, 2011 - 11:27

This is like student work.

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velleSaturday, July 23, 2011 - 12:17

i like it but personification of my favourite seafood makes me feel emphathy for them which is making me think ill be a better human being if i were vegetarian. >.<
enjoyed this anyway!