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snolet's picture
snolet
104 pencils

I hate to post negative comments. But this campain had a lot of problems.

First, the girl's expression is... I don't know. She's probably a nice girl, but strange choice of picture. The photographer took only one shot?

Second, the photshop job is not well done. (I'm so polite)

Third, the art direction in general is so ordinairy. Not ugly, but boring.

The art killed a good idea. So sad.

A.Bahey's picture
A.Bahey
58 pencils

I'll not go into details in this campaign ,but i want to mention very aggressively the very polite and respectable way that you framed your comments in. and i think "Ivan" will support you, cause it should be our way talking to others :)

Thank you
Ahmed Bahey/ Creative Director
Grey Advertising.Mena

sloppy4's picture
sloppy4
1496 pencils

you two need to get a room.

Amrit's picture
Amrit

Yes. Agree. I think the cut and paste negative comments on adsoftheworld are repulsive and naive. No one outside of an agency knows what it took to make ads within that agency, thus, they serve no purpose other than to spite the creators. We set our own benchmarks and I think that constructive criticism or none at all should be the way things are handled on here. Thanks.

pulchinela's picture
pulchinela
1060 pencils

I want the girl without bra.

luispiter's picture
luispiter
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Hibon's picture
Hibon
3731 pencils

I love the idea even if the execution is not great. A good original clothing ad...well done guys !!!!

Simple ideas are the best !

STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
1607 pencils

There's nothing Ogilvy about these amateurish ads. I mean, you use an underage anorexic model with bad hair, a sucky tan and possibly fake boobs? The suit doesn't even fit well. On the other ad they hired a cross-eyed model, probably his first gig. And don't even get me started on the poor Photoshop work and mediocre art direction. Did anyone notice the lock has no keyhole? Gill Sans? Gimme a break.

www.storytellerscreative.com

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minimaloid's picture
minimaloid
123 pencils

second that

Hibon's picture
Hibon
3731 pencils

Hummmm, i dont think that your creative page : www.storytellerscreative.com is better than this ad, (guys just go and take a look !), but i agree that Ogilvy as much better work than this.

Simple ideas are the best !

STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
1607 pencils

Guys please do go take a look! And while you're at it, take a look at Mr. Hibon's photo here:

http://www.facebook.com/people/Nicolas_Hibon/805638733

www.storytellerscreative.com

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Hibon's picture
Hibon
3731 pencils

Tks STRTLRS, if there's a nice creative girl that would like to contact me on my facebook, .... welcome.

Simple ideas are the best !

STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
1607 pencils

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Rookieoftheyear's picture
Rookieoftheyear
38 pencils

Calling people amateur then using the word sucky makes me laugh.

STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
1607 pencils

Sucky and Rookie go hand in hand. They even rhyme! Glad I made you laugh though.

www.storytellerscreative.com

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minimaloid's picture
minimaloid
123 pencils

WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER EYEBROWS AND EYES???

STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
1607 pencils

She's still in shock that somebody pierced her tit with a lock. I would be too.

www.storytellerscreative.com

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pinkey chow's picture
pinkey chow
4 pencils

一般,没什么!

okee dokee's picture
okee dokee
21 pencils

Doesn’t work.

Guest's picture
Guest

Somebody Please Give Me the Keys!!

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