Advertising Agency: Luvi Ogilvy, France, Reunion Island
Creative Director / Art Director / Copywriter: Philippe Amsallem
Photographer: Le Studio
Published: May 2008
I'll not go into details in this campaign ,but i want to mention very aggressively the very polite and respectable way that you framed your comments in. and i think "Ivan" will support you, cause it should be our way talking to others :)
Thank you
Ahmed Bahey/ Creative Director
Grey Advertising.Mena
Yes. Agree. I think the cut and paste negative comments on adsoftheworld are repulsive and naive. No one outside of an agency knows what it took to make ads within that agency, thus, they serve no purpose other than to spite the creators. We set our own benchmarks and I think that constructive criticism or none at all should be the way things are handled on here. Thanks.
There's nothing Ogilvy about these amateurish ads. I mean, you use an underage anorexic model with bad hair, a sucky tan and possibly fake boobs? The suit doesn't even fit well. On the other ad they hired a cross-eyed model, probably his first gig. And don't even get me started on the poor Photoshop work and mediocre art direction. Did anyone notice the lock has no keyhole? Gill Sans? Gimme a break.
Hummmm, i dont think that your creative page : www.storytellerscreative.com is better than this ad, (guys just go and take a look !), but i agree that Ogilvy as much better work than this.
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I hate to post negative comments. But this campain had a lot of problems.
First, the girl's expression is... I don't know. She's probably a nice girl, but strange choice of picture. The photographer took only one shot?
Second, the photshop job is not well done. (I'm so polite)
Third, the art direction in general is so ordinairy. Not ugly, but boring.
The art killed a good idea. So sad.
I'll not go into details in this campaign ,but i want to mention very aggressively the very polite and respectable way that you framed your comments in. and i think "Ivan" will support you, cause it should be our way talking to others :)
Thank you
Ahmed Bahey/ Creative Director
Grey Advertising.Mena
you two need to get a room.
Yes. Agree. I think the cut and paste negative comments on adsoftheworld are repulsive and naive. No one outside of an agency knows what it took to make ads within that agency, thus, they serve no purpose other than to spite the creators. We set our own benchmarks and I think that constructive criticism or none at all should be the way things are handled on here. Thanks.
I want the girl without bra.
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nice
www.barcreativo.com
I love the idea even if the execution is not great. A good original clothing ad...well done guys !!!!
Simple ideas are the best !
There's nothing Ogilvy about these amateurish ads. I mean, you use an underage anorexic model with bad hair, a sucky tan and possibly fake boobs? The suit doesn't even fit well. On the other ad they hired a cross-eyed model, probably his first gig. And don't even get me started on the poor Photoshop work and mediocre art direction. Did anyone notice the lock has no keyhole? Gill Sans? Gimme a break.
www.storytellerscreative.com
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second that
Hummmm, i dont think that your creative page : www.storytellerscreative.com is better than this ad, (guys just go and take a look !), but i agree that Ogilvy as much better work than this.
Simple ideas are the best !
Guys please do go take a look! And while you're at it, take a look at Mr. Hibon's photo here:
http://www.facebook.com/people/Nicolas_Hibon/805638733
www.storytellerscreative.com
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Tks STRTLRS, if there's a nice creative girl that would like to contact me on my facebook, .... welcome.
Simple ideas are the best !
De rein.
www.storytellerscreative.com
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Calling people amateur then using the word sucky makes me laugh.
Sucky and Rookie go hand in hand. They even rhyme! Glad I made you laugh though.
www.storytellerscreative.com
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WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER EYEBROWS AND EYES???
She's still in shock that somebody pierced her tit with a lock. I would be too.
www.storytellerscreative.com
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一般,没什么!
Doesn’t work.
Somebody Please Give Me the Keys!!