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reactor's picture
reactor
294 pencils

Excellent visuals throughout this campaign, for the subject matter.The copy definitely needs help. It should have one headig like-
KIDS ARE HAVING FUN AT THE CULINARY ACADEMY.

...and a sub head like- `Check-out this months new recipe in your cooking magazine`.

Reactor

adgoddess's picture
adgoddess
369 pencils

This one is the best of all three. Agree with reactor, the copy could be shorter.

Longcopylover's picture
Longcopylover
21 pencils

Why is there written an other agency's name on the top right corner? Reinhold is an agency situated in Zurich. And I think I've seen these ads before February...
Freelance team?

silenciorn's picture
silenciorn
153 pencils

I agree with reactor and adgoddess, maybe even taking out all copy. Just mention the "culinary academy for kids" would be better. In this one, it does speak for it self. And very nicely.

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whitespace's picture
whitespace
1953 pencils

is that the Vorse Raider?

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