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Crisp One's picture
Crisp One
2007 pencils

I feel like the type isn't prevalent enough.
Should take up more of the composition,
Cuz the way it is, it just looks like a
industry ad.

Both Sides of the Brain's picture
Both Sides of t...
173 pencils

It's good to see a headline-driven campaign after so long.

Although I'd love to say that someone is taking pains to write headlines I don't see anything new here. It's probably something I would have written a few years ago as a cub writer. I'm not trying to bring someone's talent crashing down. I'm just saying that some more thinking should have been done on this campaign. It's nice. But just about.

Let's try a fresher approach.

Of course, it's just my two bits.

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