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emailer
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Luz Valdez's picture
Luz Valdez
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Ahahaha ... ahahahahaha! Ahahahaha!

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Calibarak
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Yawn

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devil200
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Ahahaha ... ahahahahaha! Ahahahaha!

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adrianapr
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Ahahaha ... ahahahahaha! Ahahahaha!

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Ibrahimali
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hmmmmmmmm i think this not cool

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thirty6chambers
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nice idea and by nice i mean bad and by bad i mean missing

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teenie
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It took me forever to get this because of that &^*&%$ comma in the first line. If they mean Jill decided to stop feeding the stray and actually adopt it, then it should read "Jill stopped just feeding her stray - and decided to become its owner."

I thought copywriters were supposed to know how to write?

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adrianapr
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thanks teenie. i didn't get it till I read your #/!$!%/$#% comment... and you're right!!!
THAT LACK OF A COMMA OFFENDS ME.
Besides sorry but this is crap. Crap with a big C.

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Rog
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I'm a cat person.
I'm kinda getting this.
Kinda.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

teenie's picture
teenie
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I can't help it - every time I read this I cringe. Worst, most badly written copy I have ever, ever seen on any ad that's not about selling used cars or by-the-hour call girls. Pitooie.

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dr.look
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hm?

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hidingbehindmyself
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I don't know why they uplaoded this version, the final one that went to print doesn't have the comma...

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operate
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What comma? I've seen it in publication and there is no comma. cool idea anyway

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