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Jalna Yoghourt: Guilt trip

Jalna Yoghourt: Guilt trip
Your rating: None Average: 3.8 (8 votes)

Creatives: Geoff Wilson, Grant Booker
Planner: Christine Blackburn / Red Spider
Via: theinspirationroom

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Guest | Thu, 2009-10-29 01:35

These are nice looking and nothing else. They are so bad and the copy makes me wince. Really, really bad copy. For instance, the headline is interesting 'seeking solace in a tub', but then you go on to say 'not of the bubble variety (for all you morons who didn't get it-types)'??? That's like 'yowitch!' And 'add friendly cultures'??? Keep only the headlines and get rid of all the body copy. Please.

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Misstree | Thu, 2009-10-29 01:36

These are nice looking and nothing else. They are so bad and the copy makes me wince. Really, really bad copy. For instance, the headline is interesting 'seeking solace in a tub', but then you go on to say 'not of the bubble variety (for all you morons who didn't get it-types)'??? That's like 'yowitch!' And 'add friendly cultures'??? Keep only the headlines and get rid of all the body copy. Please.

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Not all who wander are lost.

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www.jackmancer.com | Thu, 2009-10-29 03:43

photo is grainy and ugly
copy is bad, i stopped reading because first line was boring enought for it

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munirgee | Thu, 2009-10-29 04:46

seeking solace in a tub, Seductive look... boring copy

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