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losvanvan

anuncio de escuela. Saludos!!!

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sloppy4

the headline is presumptuous. and the visual has been done to death. let's pretend this didn't happen.

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STRTLRS

The magazine spread is actually well accomplished. It's the font choices and layout that ruin it for me. This could make a good ad with some tweaking. Too many one-liners make the message confusing.

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scarfinati

23 words on this thing and I still cant tell what the selling argument is nevermind the product.

just...wow

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shut up...shut up...shut up...

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sneakyhands

lose the fake duct tape and have media make the centerfold real. then you work for the sexy boat client and probably get to work with models in the near future.

scarfinati's picture
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scarfinati

“shut up...shut up...shut up...”

Wow, insightful comment.

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Guest commenter

mmmmm good.

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Guest commenter

mmm good.

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Roger Daly

mm maybe

everartz's picture
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everartz

oh dear!!
another "thing" from italy!!!
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Everartz

| Everartz |

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Guest commenter

This week, lot of bad stuff !!!!!

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michelin

il leone a cannes era proprio un caso...

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dddg77

terrible...

dew drops's picture
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dew drops

the concept is gud

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manugon

I neither love it nor adore it

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Guest commenter

Direct and simple.

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Guest

Bad idea, good realisation!

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Guest

Bad idea, good realisation!