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Eugens's picture
Eugens
2630 pencils

this one has a typo. it looks really bad there, it cuts from the impact of the ad.

shatru's picture
shatru
101 pencils

hey plz explain me wht they r talkin bout... :(

Yokel's picture
Yokel
604 pencils

Typo? Phosphoros?

phosphoros - Noun
phosphorous - Adjective

It's okay.

Minimum's picture
Minimum
1496 pencils

first sentence:

Subjects for needed for burn....

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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

akharwatkar's picture
akharwatkar
79 pencils

subjects 'for' needed for?

Don't like it much. Doesn't evoke any emotions. This kind of subject is very delicate and should be handled with that much seriousness.

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