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Eugens's picture
2633 pencils
Eugens

this one has a typo. it looks really bad there, it cuts from the impact of the ad.

shatru's picture
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shatru

hey plz explain me wht they r talkin bout... :(

Yokel's picture
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Yokel

Typo? Phosphoros?

phosphoros - Noun
phosphorous - Adjective

It's okay.

Minimum's picture
1496 pencils
Minimum

first sentence:

Subjects for needed for burn....

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...and let the poets cry themselves to sleep. And all their tearfull words would turn back into steam

akharwatkar's picture
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akharwatkar

subjects 'for' needed for?

Don't like it much. Doesn't evoke any emotions. This kind of subject is very delicate and should be handled with that much seriousness.