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Mandark
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i think it's forced... Mom Used to bRing me Donuts whEn I was down with feveR = M.U.R.D.E.R

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i am zero
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"U think it's perfect COMMENT?! Press delete and start THINKING again!"

why will your sentence NOT lead towards MURDER...

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pashya is zero

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hungryhunter
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AWesome...all three kick ass!!!!!!

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Guest

gr8 work! simple & to the point,bang on!

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Guest

I like the concept but the tag line seems off a little... Maybe something like "After the words fade, what's left behind?"

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Guest

Nice scamy stuff. But kind of lame in reality. Obesity, suicide, and addiction are usually due to psychiatric disorders. Not because somebody is yelling at you.

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Guest

let's play Camouflage!!!

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Guest

psychiatric disorders? you flunked that psychology class didn't you?
Great concept, nicely executed.

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Guest

You're a bastard! Sorry I take the back. It might make you do smack.

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Guest

poda pooooraaaaaaaaaaaaaa..............

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Guest

Nifty time be certain and fine time.

Nif y t m be ce t in and f e t me.

Ni y t b ce t n a d e t e.

Ni t b ce n a d t .

Ni ce a d .

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Guest

Nice one, Yoda.

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Guest

Ha! nice.
Oh, nice ad campaign, too.

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Guest

This is a good series, but perhaps the contours of the text, or the kerning and leading, could have been better utilized as design elements to more effectively communicate the message.

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G.J.
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Mandark I believe you must have been neglected as a child without much love from your parents for you to make such comments for a good ad. Go get some help friend.

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Mandark
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I had a happy childhood, thank you for carring. I don't like the ad. I don't think it's touching, and the way they approached this issue is forced.

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luispiter
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feebes
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now that i collectively saw all of the ads, i have to say that i really like it. it's creative.
Mandarik, just because you didnt think of it dont bash it. it suits its purpose. there is so much that can be observed that works for what it advertises

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JediByKnight
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excellent work!!!

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whitespace
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would be more powerful if each line made sense (and in a darker way) all the way until it became ADDICT.

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Guest

I just don't think this is going to stop an asshole parent from being an asshole.

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no_user
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Good work! Well done.

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