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Spanky's picture
Spanky
4899 pencils

The first line was good. This one and the last one are too formulaic.

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skullforce
66 pencils

agreed. the panties line uses a high context insight that you share with the ad if you know why it says that. it makes you feel like you know what's up because you get the inside joke.

these other 2 lines are just whatever typical lines

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