I like the headline on this one. But referencing 'wife' in both subsequent ads makes it seem like you ran out of headline ideas, and snail trap isn't the best idea. Where in the world is one plagued with so many snails that you need traps? I get "old people = slow", but snail traps don't make the connection. And I hate to say this – but your type is god-awful.
This ad, and the rosebush one could be salvaged. I think the ideas are funny you should just push the execution more.
In Germany they're plagued with snails. I think it's cus it's always so damp here.
As for the idea, I wasn't sure if it was "old people = slow" or "snails=escargots for dinner".
Either way it's pretty lame.
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I like the headline on this one. But referencing 'wife' in both subsequent ads makes it seem like you ran out of headline ideas, and snail trap isn't the best idea. Where in the world is one plagued with so many snails that you need traps? I get "old people = slow", but snail traps don't make the connection. And I hate to say this – but your type is god-awful.
This ad, and the rosebush one could be salvaged. I think the ideas are funny you should just push the execution more.
In Germany they're plagued with snails. I think it's cus it's always so damp here.
As for the idea, I wasn't sure if it was "old people = slow" or "snails=escargots for dinner".
Either way it's pretty lame.
Soft.
>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.
the art directions sucks.
and the idea sucks even more.
it's just a teenage joke not an ad.
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Student work?
Funny i guess.
Ok, sorry, my mistake: Advertising Agency: Miami Ad School Europe
still funny
sorry, these look rather scheußlich
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the letters look weird and it's kind of lacks respect.
kind of cheap and easy.
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