andylefty's picture
4539 pencils

It's clearly a difficult task to achieve this idea.
I mean the illustrations are pretty impossible to decipher on the zoomed in version.
Maybe could have been better with just a word in each poster to allow for bigger illustrations.

sonufrommars's picture
61 pencils


kleenex's picture
34155 pencils

Font work is solid.

morse's picture
16530 pencils

Way too complicated to solve this ad. Doesn't work.

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advertising ninja's picture
advertising ninja
599 pencils

first, there is something to it but this type of story telling has been done too many times, so where is the newness?
second, the type of illustration you chose is too refined, doesnt fit the idea. it should've been closer to "handwriting"..
third, the story is almost impossible to get, let alone interesting enough for the viewer to bother.
fourth, actually you should've picked different types of illustrations to make it "personal" for different people, bringing closer to your product.
fifth, keep trying. thats the way to learn.

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