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fractalrene's picture
fractalrene
1506 pencils

Not bad, but it doesn't have that 'wow' effect. It is necessary to turn the handicap into something that big? I mean, if you put the 'fear' factor in the handicap itself that will make it look like a sure and inevitable danger.

Yokel's picture
Yokel
604 pencils

Doesn't need the shark at all. Would be a lot stronger and subtler without it.

BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON's picture
BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON
1838 pencils

Agree with Yokel, this, and infact all of them would actually work better without the 'fear' element; a massive expanse of sea, sand or long grass would be sufficient and subtler - better, in my opinion.

We're going to need more lube.

second_creator's picture
second_creator
754 pencils

can any1 translate the headline for me plz

Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

copywriter

BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON's picture
BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON
1838 pencils

"Lost fear of hazard."

We're going to need more lube.

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