jennywhx's picture
1142 pencils

cool visual concept & art direction.
i like the atmopshere

addyhoch10's picture
2592 pencils

this one's great! the other two are a bit forced...

strange format by the way...

ivan's picture

probably a half page newspaper size.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

addyhoch10's picture
2592 pencils

ok, yeah, i think you're right

thinkFRESHdesign's picture
242 pencils

ouch. All these are pretty forced. Pretty obscure items used (price tags?). I had to spend too much time trying to figure out what the heck these bugs were made out of...

original doodles + creative sweat = thinkingfresh.ca

diptanshu.roy's picture
18 pencils

thanks guys

sheetalz's picture
146 pencils

very gud job sir!!!
this one is perfect, rest are bit forced. but there are wide posibllity for extention.

aj's picture
168 pencils

nice idea, but art is slightly forced

kagemusha's picture
30 pencils

again, very poor art direction. and idea very forced. somehow the feel of the ad does not make me want to buy anything from this store.

the_ashlands's picture
1394 pencils

i wonder how many people would have said this was forced if the comment wasnt brought up in the first few crits??? sometimes i feel like some of us say things becuase of a bias developed thru reading previous comments.....i wish there was a way to hide all the comments until youve made one yourself.

this idea works people are afraid of weird bugs and people are afraid of high 'desire controlled' price tags. good job people...especially considering its out of india..no offense intended.

ManchuChanchu's picture
701 pencils

Way to go Deep! I love the butterfly.

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