Fun Factory Erotic Toys: War
You will be afraid someone might hear you.
Advertising Agency: Firstell Communications, Shanghai, China
Creative Director: Murphy Chou
Art Directors: Murphy Chou
Copywriters: Murphy Chou, Donghai Liu
Photographer: Scott Newett
Retoucher: Aaron Foster
Published: May 2008


7 Comments
outstanding.
zzbottom
This is a clever idea. I think the copy can get even more colloquial. Throw a contraction in there. "You'll be afraid someone might hear you."
-Natalie
http://www.nataliemarion.com
I'd shorten it to "someone might hear you"
Why? Why did they explain it? For me it works perfect without any line.
how about varying the executions: maybe a stereo turned up, or a speaker set facing the door..those are just off the top, there's lots of potential here
the volume should be one below maximum, so it's not mistaken for muted. also, the blurry vibrator thing is old. like my uncle ralph, was funny, now old.
Erotic Toys = Get High = Loud Moaning = Turning up the TV volume = So? Is this how advertising should be done today? Maybe you should pump the "base" alittle.