Fun Factory Erotic Toys: War

You will be afraid someone might hear you.

Advertising Agency: Firstell Communications, Shanghai, China
Creative Director: Murphy Chou
Art Directors: Murphy Chou
Copywriters: Murphy Chou, Donghai Liu
Photographer: Scott Newett
Retoucher: Aaron Foster
Published: May 2008

7 comments

ZZbottom's picture
ZZbottom
111 pencils

outstanding.

zzbottom

NatalieM's picture
NatalieM
1687 pencils

This is a clever idea. I think the copy can get even more colloquial. Throw a contraction in there. "You'll be afraid someone might hear you."

whitespace's picture
whitespace
1953 pencils

I'd shorten it to "someone might hear you"

postman's picture
postman
951 pencils

Why? Why did they explain it? For me it works perfect without any line.

artiam's picture
artiam
123 pencils

how about varying the executions: maybe a stereo turned up, or a speaker set facing the door..those are just off the top, there's lots of potential here

sneakyhands's picture
sneakyhands
1857 pencils

the volume should be one below maximum, so it's not mistaken for muted. also, the blurry vibrator thing is old. like my uncle ralph, was funny, now old.

inviniti's picture
inviniti
15 pencils

Erotic Toys = Get High = Loud Moaning = Turning up the TV volume = So? Is this how advertising should be done today? Maybe you should pump the "base" alittle.

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