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Possessions

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May 2010
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Print advertisment created by Bates 141, India for FolkPick, within the category: Recreation, Leisure.

Other than his musical instruments, he doesn't have any worldly possessions.
He didn't want a copy of his album also.
folkpick
we find music you haven't heard...

Advertising Agency: Bates 141, Calcutta, India
Creative Director: Arjun Mukherjee
Art Director: Diptanshu Roy
Copywriter: Arjun Mukherjee
Photographer: Diptanshu Roy, Abhijit Chakraborty

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iambusy's picture
iambusy
Activity Score 2219

theres no problem with the english...its indian version.

busy.

aiksing's picture
aiksing
Activity Score 8

imho, the part of the copy that ended with "also", is seriously a problem to me.. sounds quite broken. The pink text is kinda difficult to read, esp with the tight kern.

Misstree's picture
Misstree
Activity Score 425

"too". He didn't want a copy of his album too. Such a lovely product, it could have given rise to some gorgeous copy. Sadly not in this series.

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Not all who wander are lost.

Abrahams's picture
Abrahams
Activity Score 109

'Also' is a misfit. Rest very fine. great work. All three of the series are off the beat.

Guest's picture
Guest

How could a copywriter make such an error?

Guest's picture
Guest

I guess, the word 'even' fits well. - "He didn't even want a copy of his album."

Guest's picture
Guest

No need to add even, really. "He didn't want a copy of his album."

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Dharmesh aka danny
Activity Score 334

The copy part is alluring to read...

Dharmesh Padia

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antiad777
Activity Score 16

Even would have been better. "He didn't want a copy of his album even"

iambusy's picture
iambusy
Activity Score 2219

theres no problem with the english...its indian version.

busy.

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