FolkPick: Possessions

Other than his musical instruments, he doesn't have any worldly possessions.
He didn't want a copy of his album also.
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Advertising Agency: Bates 141, Calcutta, India
Creative Director: Arjun Mukherjee
Art Director: Diptanshu Roy
Copywriter: Arjun Mukherjee
Photographer: Diptanshu Roy, Abhijit Chakraborty
Published: May 2010

9 comments

aiksing's picture
aiksing
8 pencils

imho, the part of the copy that ended with "also", is seriously a problem to me.. sounds quite broken. The pink text is kinda difficult to read, esp with the tight kern.

Misstree's picture
Misstree
425 pencils

"too". He didn't want a copy of his album too. Such a lovely product, it could have given rise to some gorgeous copy. Sadly not in this series.

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Not all who wander are lost.

Abrahams's picture
Abrahams
109 pencils

'Also' is a misfit. Rest very fine. great work. All three of the series are off the beat.

Guest's picture
Guest

How could a copywriter make such an error?

Guest's picture
Guest

I guess, the word 'even' fits well. - "He didn't even want a copy of his album."

Guest's picture
Guest

No need to add even, really. "He didn't want a copy of his album."

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Dharmesh aka danny
334 pencils

The copy part is alluring to read...

Dharmesh Padia

antiad777's picture
antiad777
16 pencils

Even would have been better. "He didn't want a copy of his album even"

iambusy's picture
iambusy
2219 pencils

theres no problem with the english...its indian version.

busy.

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