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arke1's picture
arke1
237 pencils

Cool illustration! That's like my perfect pad, needs more fireman's poles though.

luispiter's picture
luispiter
2756 pencils

i like the art direction

jackblack's picture
jackblack
2328 pencils

Okay. Not bad.

dadada's picture
dadada
1720 pencils

CEO / FGV ?? what's the product? what's the message should i get?

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jliopf's picture
jliopf
89 pencils

Sweet art direction! I like!

CuriousPencil's picture
CuriousPencil
4227 pencils

Guys. If you're running a course for executives, and telling them you can get them upstairs where they can play indoor golf in colour, wouldn't it be nice if those nice blue stairs of yours WENT SOMEWHERE?

krautland's picture
krautland
3216 pencils

explosion drawing principle. you always separate items so you can see them better.

DIVPravin's picture
DIVPravin
54 pencils

not bad

maximvg's picture
maximvg
156 pencils

I think if the make distance between levels is large or show the evolution of chaos in an optimized state make this AD better.

morse's picture
morse
16547 pencils

Very nice art.

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Marlus Lau's picture
Marlus Lau
1808 pencils

The idea is not new, but is cool. But what 'CuriousPencil' said makes sense: the product should lead to the benefit directly. I think would be stronger.

lalmadv's picture
lalmadv
78 pencils

I think there's a good reason for putting the stairs apart, it's a kind of "call to action". It's up to you to make the stairs useful: you have to run this course to do it.

sam4grafix's picture
sam4grafix
94 pencils

nice execution

ITS ALL BEEN DONE!

kleenex's picture
kleenex
34580 pencils

not bad.

chapelier's picture
chapelier
154 pencils

Love the art, but not sure what they're selling though.

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theanc's picture
theanc
2781 pencils

Very nice art and idea.

Schizzy's picture
Schizzy
203 pencils

Would've made an even better DM I think.

Kyput's picture
Kyput
62 pencils

done exactly the same..

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