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Fetish Hot Erotic Shop: Scratches

Fetish Hot Erotic Shop: Scratches
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Advertising Agency: Invent Propaganda, Brazil

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Neil Levy's picture 316 pencils

neil levy
You have a typo on the ad. If it's for a client, fix it before you run it. If it's spec, same thing as it's going in your book.

I think (and please someone correct me if I am mistaken) the ad should read "It's up to you to have a spicier life" NOT "Is up to you..." Change the IS to an IT'S

It is up to you to have a spicier life. Or you could say "A spicier life is up to you." if you really want to say "is". Either way, fix it. While you're at it, maybe the line can get stronger since the visual is really cool.

neil levy

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture 10500 pencils

I think that's how Brazillians (South Americans) talk. Almost like Pidgin English. I've noticed it quite often reading their comments.

BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON's picture 1872 pencils

wtf is Pidgin English?

We're going to need more lube.

Neil Levy's picture 316 pencils

neil levy
interesting...that could be true. i didn't know that. but the thing is, it's written in english so unless it's a translation, i think it would lose points for basic bad grammer in a show.

neil levy

reactor's picture 296 pencils

Neil Levy said it all

Reactor

Renato Bruchmann's picture 2 pencils

guys, what is important here is the idea
it doesn't matter if the english is correct or not, is not a grammar championship, it is an ideia thing...

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture 10500 pencils

See what I mean, Neil?

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