Ouch! You hit extremly hard guys! we just wanted to say that this gratted cheese melts a lot in hot pastas. That's why there are strings that catch pastas.
Just try this Cheese on pastas, its a very good meal.
Alexandre, in my opinion this is good and appropriate ad for this product. That's exactly how I got this ad - interestingly melted cheese that have caught pasta butterflies.
And I must say it actually made me feel hungry and want some pasta with cheese!!! :)
Don't take the abuse too hard... u get the feeling that there are more people on this site commenting on ads than out there actually making them.
For me it got the point across, although I do think a line that gave focus to the whole 'traps pasta' idea would have made it stronger. Not bad though.
ahhh...if you put the pack and the line you just said on an ad, i bet it will give better results that playing around a spider idea....
and i don't need to tell you how many people hate spiders....
Submitted by nuclearshower on Wed, 2007-01-24 18:03.
Totally, note that there is some commenter here is just student, they arent PROFESSIONAL. Nice work Alenxandra.. just an opinion of mine, I think you can slightly reduce the product smaller, its too big.. Slightly more breathing space wud be better
Im sure the cheese tastes great and we got your point:-) But with all due respect, somehow "web" is not the best tool to base an idea for food on.At least to me...
I talk to the Enremont Client about your idea, and he seems to be ok for a kind of ad: After batman begins here is Batman eats pastas. (say it with "the voice" and it works. Sure)
but the cheese could look better (more like cheese) and the big floating package is a little weird. i know the client probably wanted it big, but it would have been nice tucked in a little.
Submitted by wickedcheese on Sat, 2007-01-27 17:49.
it's a little misleading, but I got the point in the end. So I guess it's alright. just that if one doesn't look further at the strands, they'd think it were real spider webs.
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ok, whats pasta and cheese got to do with spiders?
same question i had with the extra thin potato in the knife spot yesterday....i dont get it
Nothing, dude. This is just a bad ad.
i guess someone must have liked it to put it on this site. i also just noticed that it took 5 creatives to come up with it.
Ouch! You hit extremly hard guys! we just wanted to say that this gratted cheese melts a lot in hot pastas. That's why there are strings that catch pastas.
Just try this Cheese on pastas, its a very good meal.
... see you...
Alexandre, in my opinion this is good and appropriate ad for this product. That's exactly how I got this ad - interestingly melted cheese that have caught pasta butterflies.
And I must say it actually made me feel hungry and want some pasta with cheese!!! :)
Don't take the abuse too hard... u get the feeling that there are more people on this site commenting on ads than out there actually making them.
For me it got the point across, although I do think a line that gave focus to the whole 'traps pasta' idea would have made it stronger. Not bad though.
ahhh...if you put the pack and the line you just said on an ad, i bet it will give better results that playing around a spider idea....
and i don't need to tell you how many people hate spiders....
Totally, note that there is some commenter here is just student, they arent PROFESSIONAL. Nice work Alenxandra.. just an opinion of mine, I think you can slightly reduce the product smaller, its too big.. Slightly more breathing space wud be better
I bet that professionals don't take nuclear showers..... or like ads like these...
Im sure the cheese tastes great and we got your point:-) But with all due respect, somehow "web" is not the best tool to base an idea for food on.At least to me...
I just say that this id ad is so.... cheesssyyy. mmm yummy
Maybe could be used for a batman promo :-)
I talk to the Enremont Client about your idea, and he seems to be ok for a kind of ad: After batman begins here is Batman eats pastas. (say it with "the voice" and it works. Sure)
;-)
I thought the web was cos it is so light it floats, (like maltesers) but then again, I had been smoking crack.
Now that its warn off, i realise its just a pap ad.
Works!
In dire need of a headline
EXTRA, EXTRA.. SPIDERMAN ATE TOO MUCH CHEESE.
Nice idea, bad art direction.
this is not a bad idea.
but the cheese could look better (more like cheese) and the big floating package is a little weird. i know the client probably wanted it big, but it would have been nice tucked in a little.
again, not a bad idea.
it's a little misleading, but I got the point in the end. So I guess it's alright. just that if one doesn't look further at the strands, they'd think it were real spider webs.
And then the images of spiders come in... :S
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