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Guest commenter

Nice mac visual, looking forward to seeing what the finished ad looks like.

SeanMartin's picture
SeanMartin

The layout severely undecuts the pacing the headline. Pity, because, while it's not great, it's not terrible either. It's just unfortunately made worse by poor distribution of elements.

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Here, let me save everyone the trouble of asking. "Do you even work in advertising?"

Stephen London's picture
Stephen London

Indeed, it's not the final version of the ad.
You can see the final one on www.dorchestercollection.com

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Guest commenter

The Photoshop on the Dorchester website looks the same as this ad. Stephen, I think you failed to appreciate a fine example of biting sarcasm there.

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