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Ney Frances's picture
Ney Frances
660 pencils

and the chair should desapear too! and the table! ohhhhhhh! now i get it! it´s all in the aquarium! damn it! This guys are loonies!!!

is there life before death?

Nthngmn's picture
Nthngmn
626 pencils

Nice. I like the small detail of having the coffee table slightly lifted from the floor.

All in all, not bad.

Endeio's picture
Endeio
270 pencils

All in all, not good.

Nthngmn's picture
Nthngmn
626 pencils

hack

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

I like it.

Smile, guys. Did we all just have an ad knocked back?

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

me thinks's picture
me thinks
722 pencils

That flooded water is so pure and unreal too!

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

What is this? Colour by numbers?
Do we need it spelt out for us?

Let go... and let the viewers use their imaginations.

Are we worried they won't get it?

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

Joseph Campbell's picture
Joseph Campbell
230 pencils

If it were really a room filled with water, it would not be as interesting. The way it is executed asks the reader to make the connection. The picture poses a question the reader wants answered. Just like the first line in a great novel. Allowing the reader to make the connection between floating fish and house insurance makes the reader feel good because she has figured something out. This is what all good advertising is about: engaging the reader. I'm with you on this one, Rog.

And yes, Nthngmn, the coffee table is a nice touch.

We'll reconvene at 10.

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Ney Frances's picture
Ney Frances
660 pencils

if i were the reader in the first step i´d skip the page, sorry!

is there life before death?

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

i love this visual. sometimes i don't want to see the whole story. i'm glad i don't see water reflection marks on the walls or bubbles coming from the fish. i want fish floating in my apartment. it's a lovely fantasy ad.

msred's picture
msred
491 pencils

humm yes but i still want to see watery shadows.

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

Imagine them.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

bigbadfatmadafaka's picture
bigbadfatmadafaka
486 pencils

come on...
again

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