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ALL OF YOU SAYING THE COPY IS GOOD, CLEARLY AREN'T COPYWRITERS. EVERY COPYWRITER KNOWS THAT SEE AND SAY COPY IS TERRIBLE. YOU DON'T HAVE TO SAY "FAT" IN THE LINE AT ALL. SOMETHING AS SIMPLE AS "KEEP ACTIVE" OR " DON'T LET YOURSELF GO. MOVE." SAY IT ALL WITHOUT HAVING TO SAY "YOU'LL GET FAT" DIRECTLY. GET IT?

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