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EDvert's picture
EDvert
Activity Score 36

Just hope the coffee left a better taste in the mouth than the ad.

justpassingby's picture
justpassingby
Activity Score 1368

This is the worst one because something was added to it to emphasise the idea.
The glasses one which i feel is the best was natural.

Craig and David or craig david, please go back to the drawing room and give me more concepts for the caribbean cruise and the antartic cruise. Ill see you in my office next week thursday.

Rog's picture
Rog
Activity Score 6082

Haven't seen the other one yet...but I don't mind this.
The lines could be a tad more doodly/dreamy.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

Yr's picture
Yr
Activity Score 168

this is the best one because of it's visual. Emphasis shows that every island will be visited - and that's great (^:
The other two are not so strong in comparison

Yr's picture
Yr
Activity Score 168

ah.. and when and where you're usually dreamin' about vacations? In office of course

adman4u's picture
adman4u
Activity Score 10

though a little overtly emphatic, i guess the lines are just ok. when ur thinking hard about something,
you often tend to scribble something thats actually playing on your mind.

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
Activity Score 2824

Its not bad, it looks dull and the line is a bit dull, but the placing of the thought within the day to day is insightful, just where alot of people would indeed be dreaming of a carribbean cruise or similar.

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chinaski's picture
chinaski
Activity Score 951

forced...

TopJeff's picture
TopJeff
Activity Score 479

I agree... feels kinda forced. I can't imagine a coffee spill being like that, and no matter how much you want a vacation, I do not think most people would sit there and play with a coffee spill on their desk.

Jeff

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HOLA's picture
HOLA
Activity Score 82

Clever. Not forced. Just under developed.
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Simplify.

teenie's picture
teenie
Activity Score 1894

The idea has lots of potential - but it's just not pushed far enough. This one especially. They should have brainstormed a ton of ppotential ideas and picked the bst ones. It feels like they just went with the first that came to mind.

Plus there's something I don't like about the "Dreaming about..." line. I'm not even sure what it is. It's just too easy - not inspiring.

EDvert's picture
EDvert
Activity Score 36

Just hope the coffee left a better taste in the mouth than the ad.

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