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Strawberry thread

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June 2008
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Copywriter:Humberto Alvarado

Advertising Agency: Cerebro Y&R Panama
Creative Director: Jorge Heilbron
Art Director: Juan Francisco Bernal
Illustrator: Ricardo Lopez
Photographer: Ricardo Lopez
Additional credits: Alberto Weand Ortiz

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macluvin's picture
macluvin
Activity Score 397

my first read on it was it's strawberry flavored floss. so if that was the case, then the visual is really good. other than that, like everyone is saying, the message becomes less clear as to what you are saying.

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BenditaSeaTuZurda
Activity Score 150

I really like the campaign even though the art direction could have been better.
Great stuff anyways, good thinking.

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Guest

great just great well done

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everartz's picture
everartz
Activity Score 7609

very nice and original too thumbs up!

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Guest

Good to see different thinking for dental floss.

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Guest

How could it have been better? It looks OK to me

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475

The logic does not quite stack up.

The art is a bit rusty too.

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Guest

Agreed. What is this ad saying? Showing fruit "falling apart at the seams" suggests a slow digestive process.

Very bad.

matks's picture
matks
Activity Score 476

My digestive process slows down when I read such comments.
An ad is not an Excel document. It's not about logic and calculations. Just the opposite.
One of the best ad books is titled "Fuck Logic" and there is a strong reason for it.
The ad does communicate the benefit in a very clear, interesting and original way. It's a "quick" KV. Would make a great and effective outdoor, which is very rare.

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Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475

Yes. Fuck logic. But only if the message is clear. This isn't. It could easily be interpreted as strawberry flavour or WTF? This is why it's bad. It would not get past a good CD. I assure you.

matks's picture
matks
Activity Score 476

You've got strawberry pips in the teeth and you use the floss to remove them. So easy. There're people that don't have such problem but for some it's a discomfort. I'm sure the target (including me;-) get the ad right. Insight is here, whatever the best CD says;-)

tak's picture
tak
Activity Score 23

Very graphic. Smart.

Guest's picture
Guest

Don't Like, it makes you understand that the floss is strawberry flavor!!

matks's picture
matks
Activity Score 476

No it doesn't. It has a strong insight, you've got to eat a strawberry to get it.

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Guest

booooooooooooooooooooooring.

forced.

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Guest

It doesn't have a cow, chicken or pig. I like it!

sirvan's picture
sirvan
Activity Score 29860

Doesn't communicate accurately: does it taste like strawberry? Or does it get strawberry seeds out of your teeth?

It's a good-looking ad, executed well. But too clever by half.

+++

"I love some things, and don't love some other things."

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maashookshee
Activity Score 414

this is really smart ,simple and selling one respect for that ...

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bhatnaturally
Activity Score 95

Looks good. But confusing - can't figure out what the take out is

Zlyuk's picture
Zlyuk
Activity Score 132

Bravo!

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Guest

fucking bravo!!!!!!

just write's picture
just write
Activity Score 653

good thinking... great execution...

Guest's picture
Guest

well executed, But what the hell are you trying to say??????????

tacaz0n's picture
tacaz0n
Activity Score 64

I ask myself that question all the time when I go through the process. I'm just curious to know what part doesn't sit right with you?

Punch's picture
Punch
Activity Score 612

Qué buen trabajo señores. Muy, muy bueno!

"no silencies lo que no sabes expresar".

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Guest

Exelente campaña, hace mucho que no veia una idea con un tan buen punto de union entre grafica e idea.
felicitaciones a la agencia...salud.

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Guest

what does it sat friend???

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Guest

very nice, I would do a version of mango.

macluvin's picture
macluvin
Activity Score 397

my first read on it was it's strawberry flavored floss. so if that was the case, then the visual is really good. other than that, like everyone is saying, the message becomes less clear as to what you are saying.

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