Coca-Cola Blak: Dream

Coca-Cola Blak: Dream

Advertising Agency: Marcel Paris, France
Creative Directors: Anne de Maupeou, Frederic Temin
Copywriter: Eric Jannon
Art Director: Dimitri Guerassimov

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you cannot read in dreams.

I disagree, I have read in my dreams

you cannot understand advertising in Romania.

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well, i'd say the copy is somewhat poor. and by poor i mean unfinished. the first verse is ok, but from the fault-rhyme of happen/heaven it all goes a bit messy... the rhyme, rhythm and structure fall apart in too many cases. maybe in the original version (french, i suppose) it sounded different (better, i hope), but the art of translation should not be forgotten.

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