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jorj's picture
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jorjTuesday, September 22, 2009 - 07:30

Did they really call for that? Heh.

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everartzTuesday, September 22, 2009 - 08:32

good insight.. and i dont think that they did that!

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mpared's picture
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mparedTuesday, September 22, 2009 - 09:40

i like it

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GuestTuesday, September 22, 2009 - 10:32

good work guys.

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ProfTuesday, September 22, 2009 - 10:55

cool type work, not sure about the general art direction though.

the line/concept doesnt make any sense. comparing 2 things that have nothing to do with each other in order to emphasize the huge gap between them is bad conceptualization. 1st semester ad school mistake, in my opinion.

Quite really.

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maranca82Thursday, September 24, 2009 - 18:46

I agree, conceptually this is on par with first-quarter student work. For the assignment this execution is expected. To make it great, do something different.

Also the copy could use some finessing. Starting every line with "And in" is too formulaic and doesn't show your skills as a writer.

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neooneTuesday, September 22, 2009 - 12:01

awesome