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September 2009
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Advertising Agency: Miami Ad School Europe, Hamburg, Germany
Art Director: Sara Kujundzic
Copywriter: Ruchir Sachdev

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I agree, conceptually this is on par with first-quarter student work. For the assignment this execution is expected. To make it great, do something different.

Also the copy could use some finessing. Starting every line with "And in" is too formulaic and doesn't show your skills as a writer.

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