reactor's picture
294 pencils

Now these ads just look like pages out of a biology text book. Need some strong copy to make the point- what ever it may be.


andré ™'s picture
andré ™
144 pencils

I think that's the intention. Not bad, but not so great either.

NatalieM's picture
1685 pencils

The concept is smart, but it needs refinement and more personality from the designer. More copy would be great, too. How can you make a call to action? These work as comps, but would definitely need a round of tweaks before publishing.

LisAD's picture
446 pencils

I disagree. They don't need better illustrations or more copy. They need a better idea and something with a little more truth in it. I haven't seen this exact execution before, but a lot of similar ones. I like the visual, but to me the idea is a little weak.

StuartLittle's picture
468 pencils

i don't think its working

Mike.L's picture
79 pencils

yes the idea is not bed I like illustrations, strong personality.

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