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Bebop's picture
Bebop
45 pencils

Smart.

drizae's picture
drizae
503 pencils

As a copywriter, I find these strangely appealing! Beautiful art direction.

Fail Harder.

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture
Jet Propulsion Lab
10681 pencils

Bad headline! I spotted at least three typos in the body copy, too.
Does anybody proofread ads anymore?

Martijn's picture
Martijn
1896 pencils

I like the idea but I think they pusted it too far. I don't think it needs the body, just a headline would have been enough. The art direction is very heavy, I don't really like it. They could have done something really good with the idea (but they didn't).

PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture
PaulyG_fill in ...
1148 pencils

it doesn't need a headline or copy - the guitar speaks for itself. That's the point.

Rog's picture
Rog
6092 pencils

One hit wonder... with two remixes.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

me thinks's picture
me thinks
722 pencils

Well said Rog.

jacksonrabbit's picture
jacksonrabbit
290 pencils

I think notes would have worked much better here than just waves, at least in part of the copy. And three is overkill for this campaign.

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
3647 pencils

I think these are really fresh. hope they do well for the client and in the shows.

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