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Alexis-Chellito's picture
Alexis-Chellito
Activity Score 111

Let him know? How? What are you saying?

Jasonzoro's picture
Jasonzoro
Activity Score 3

这个要换成旧皮鞋多好~

morse's picture
morse
Activity Score 17364

Really nice ad.

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Hadrons's picture
Hadrons
Activity Score 6017

What d'ya mean "Let him know..." !
Totally mealy-mouthed copy.

Knowledge will not serve him.
Mothers, just stop serving!

THERE'S NO HEAVIER BURDEN THAN A GREAT POTENTIAL

bate_palmas's picture
bate_palmas
Activity Score 1479

bit unfair - its obviously a translation - they mustve meant 'teach'

Hadrons's picture
Hadrons
Activity Score 6017

How much does 5 seconds of a native English speakers time cost in the grand scheme ?!

THERE'S NO HEAVIER BURDEN THAN A GREAT POTENTIAL

bate_palmas's picture
bate_palmas
Activity Score 1479

Well, if they went to all that trouble the guy would charge for at least half a day :)

Be that as it may, it's just laziness I guess. They wanted to post it on an international website so they just did a quick translate and there you go: a pretty uninteresting advert with a poorly translated headline.

Alexandra Gregor's picture
Alexandra Gregor
Activity Score 10

Fine ad. I like the chain of donuts. It depicts very well how some just cannot find an end. Some don't feel it naturally and have to learn that what they feel is not actual hunger, it's boredom, appetite, sadness, depression or the try to fill their needs in a way they're not supposed to.

Wordfruit's picture
Wordfruit
Activity Score 1023

I think the idea is ok.

I think you should change the line, so you're suggesting the parent should learn, in order to help his/her child -- I think if you phrase the line as a question, probably beginning with the word "How...?", you might help the viewer be inquisitive: to go to the website and find out...

killazol1's picture
killazol1
Activity Score 354

i do not like it. the reason is that the image is trying to much to deliver the message. also i'm not sure about the art direction. it's a little bit akward.

edged's picture
edged
Activity Score 27

I thought it was produced in Korea. Not in Malaysia.

ScratchdCanvas's picture
ScratchdCanvas
Activity Score 30

Like the above comment, maybe copy needs to change to "teach him to to control his appetite "

mr.x's picture
mr.x
Activity Score 998

Whats up with the shadows..

Alexis-Chellito's picture
Alexis-Chellito
Activity Score 111

Let him know? How? What are you saying?

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