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Jasonzoro's picture
Jasonzoro
3 pencils

这个要换成旧皮鞋多好~

morse's picture
morse
15439 pencils

Really nice ad.

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Hadrons's picture
Hadrons
5743 pencils

What d'ya mean "Let him know..." !
Totally mealy-mouthed copy.

Knowledge will not serve him.
Mothers, just stop serving!

THERE'S NO HEAVIER BURDEN THAN A GREAT POTENTIAL

bate_palmas's picture
bate_palmas
1479 pencils

bit unfair - its obviously a translation - they mustve meant 'teach'

Hadrons's picture
Hadrons
5743 pencils

How much does 5 seconds of a native English speakers time cost in the grand scheme ?!

THERE'S NO HEAVIER BURDEN THAN A GREAT POTENTIAL

bate_palmas's picture
bate_palmas
1479 pencils

Well, if they went to all that trouble the guy would charge for at least half a day :)

Be that as it may, it's just laziness I guess. They wanted to post it on an international website so they just did a quick translate and there you go: a pretty uninteresting advert with a poorly translated headline.

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Alexandra Gregor
10 pencils

Fine ad. I like the chain of donuts. It depicts very well how some just cannot find an end. Some don't feel it naturally and have to learn that what they feel is not actual hunger, it's boredom, appetite, sadness, depression or the try to fill their needs in a way they're not supposed to.

Wordfruit's picture
Wordfruit
1023 pencils

I think the idea is ok.

I think you should change the line, so you're suggesting the parent should learn, in order to help his/her child -- I think if you phrase the line as a question, probably beginning with the word "How...?", you might help the viewer be inquisitive: to go to the website and find out...

killazol1's picture
killazol1
354 pencils

i do not like it. the reason is that the image is trying to much to deliver the message. also i'm not sure about the art direction. it's a little bit akward.

edged's picture
edged
27 pencils

I thought it was produced in Korea. Not in Malaysia.

ScratchdCanvas's picture
ScratchdCanvas
30 pencils

Like the above comment, maybe copy needs to change to "teach him to to control his appetite "

mr.x's picture
mr.x
952 pencils

Whats up with the shadows..

Alexis-Chellito's picture
Alexis-Chellito
111 pencils

Let him know? How? What are you saying?

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