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wickedcheese's picture
wickedcheese
Activity Score 84

it's a little misleading, but I got the point in the end. So I guess it's alright. just that if one doesn't look further at the strands, they'd think it were real spider webs.

And then the images of spiders come in... :S

justpassingby's picture
justpassingby
Activity Score 1368

ok, whats pasta and cheese got to do with spiders?

the_ashlands's picture
the_ashlands
Activity Score 1394

same question i had with the extra thin potato in the knife spot yesterday....i dont get it

Have Heart's picture
Have Heart
Activity Score 922

Nothing, dude. This is just a bad ad.

justpassingby's picture
justpassingby
Activity Score 1368

i guess someone must have liked it to put it on this site. i also just noticed that it took 5 creatives to come up with it.

Alexandre's picture
Alexandre
Activity Score 55

Ouch! You hit extremly hard guys! we just wanted to say that this gratted cheese melts a lot in hot pastas. That's why there are strings that catch pastas.
Just try this Cheese on pastas, its a very good meal.

... see you...

Sandis Grantins's picture
Sandis Grantins
Activity Score 26

Alexandre, in my opinion this is good and appropriate ad for this product. That's exactly how I got this ad - interestingly melted cheese that have caught pasta butterflies.
And I must say it actually made me feel hungry and want some pasta with cheese!!! :)

slim's picture
slim
Activity Score 1047

Don't take the abuse too hard... u get the feeling that there are more people on this site commenting on ads than out there actually making them.
For me it got the point across, although I do think a line that gave focus to the whole 'traps pasta' idea would have made it stronger. Not bad though.

Paolo keppella's picture
Paolo keppella
Activity Score 51

ahhh...if you put the pack and the line you just said on an ad, i bet it will give better results that playing around a spider idea....
and i don't need to tell you how many people hate spiders....

Think outside the X_BOX

nuclearshower's picture
nuclearshower
Activity Score 233

Totally, note that there is some commenter here is just student, they arent PROFESSIONAL. Nice work Alenxandra.. just an opinion of mine, I think you can slightly reduce the product smaller, its too big.. Slightly more breathing space wud be better

Paolo keppella's picture
Paolo keppella
Activity Score 51

I bet that professionals don't take nuclear showers..... or like ads like these...

Think outside the X_BOX

RAZ21's picture
RAZ21
Activity Score 253

Im sure the cheese tastes great and we got your point:-) But with all due respect, somehow "web" is not the best tool to base an idea for food on.At least to me...

pixelbomb1's picture
pixelbomb1
Activity Score 2555

I just say that this id ad is so.... cheesssyyy. mmm yummy

Sincerely,
Arnold Santillan
714-206-2459

chimie's picture
chimie
Activity Score 156

Maybe could be used for a batman promo :-)

Alexandre's picture
Alexandre
Activity Score 55

I talk to the Enremont Client about your idea, and he seems to be ok for a kind of ad: After batman begins here is Batman eats pastas. (say it with "the voice" and it works. Sure)

;-)

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
Activity Score 2824

I thought the web was cos it is so light it floats, (like maltesers) but then again, I had been smoking crack.

Now that its warn off, i realise its just a pap ad.

Besha's picture
Besha
Activity Score 295

Works!

PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture
PaulyG_fill in ...
Activity Score 1148

In dire need of a headline

pixelbomb1's picture
pixelbomb1
Activity Score 2555

EXTRA, EXTRA.. SPIDERMAN ATE TOO MUCH CHEESE.

Sincerely,
Arnold Santillan
714-206-2459

Eagle's picture
Eagle
Activity Score 34

Nice idea, bad art direction.

kc_brock's picture
kc_brock
Activity Score 703

this is not a bad idea.

but the cheese could look better (more like cheese) and the big floating package is a little weird. i know the client probably wanted it big, but it would have been nice tucked in a little.

again, not a bad idea.

rd

wickedcheese's picture
wickedcheese
Activity Score 84

it's a little misleading, but I got the point in the end. So I guess it's alright. just that if one doesn't look further at the strands, they'd think it were real spider webs.

And then the images of spiders come in... :S

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