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kalpesh78's picture
kalpesh78
2580 pencils

Its a basic thought. I like the execution though.

ideas....30 minutes nahi toh free.

everartz's picture
everartz
7613 pencils

i do like the idea and the execution, but im asking is it true that some beautiful house have such a bad smell? in other words shouldnt they have shot a simpler dirtier house than this one?

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Rule's picture
Rule
8 pencils

agreed, if you have such a house...and your carpet stinks this bad. don't buy this product, fire the maid...

killazol1's picture
killazol1
354 pencils

good idea. not good art direction

Priyanka Agarwal's picture
Priyanka Agarwal
4 pencils

excellent idea and execution

Wordfruit's picture
Wordfruit
1023 pencils

I don't see a benefit communicated that is specific to this product, as opposed to any carpet cleaner.

And people above mentioned someone wouldn't have a super-clean house with a carpet like this.

You could address this by giving the information that carpets collect dirt a lot more than non-carpet floors.

I also think it might be more effective if you show the process. Not just the dirty, but the clean also.

Some of this stuff is maybe practical stuff which I'd see as working towards selling the product more than working towards impressing ad people.

But one doesn't have to rule out the other, depending on the solutions you come up with.

donetodeath's picture
donetodeath
72 pencils

sheep one is better, but both have poor perspective and misleading visuals, should of added some short tag line to guide the viewers

wave's picture
wave
360 pencils

love it!!!

Super Trouper's picture
Super Trouper
22 pencils

yeah

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