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besoz's picture
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besoz

love it but a pit old

tantrik_indian's picture
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tantrik_indian

What is the product?
~~be cool eh!~~

~~this paranoid survived!~~

ivan's picture
ivan

Bank, credit card

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

postman's picture
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postman

It took me too long to read these (mostly the first one, of course). I think, most people won't care.

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture
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Jet Propulsion Lab

A sale.
Please get it right if you're going to even ATTEMPT to reach an English speaking audience.

Pacific Blue's picture
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Pacific Blue

Anyone know the name of this is typo?
Thanx

fractalrene's picture
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fractalrene

Not bad... I think some art work may improve it, like the emboss on a credit card close up... or actually make them and send'em as direct mail to potential clients.

Qbird's picture
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Qbird

mmm....
personally.. i don't like it, credit card got 16 DIGITS but no alphabet.. why needa put in alphabet???
just to make up the idea???

chirp chirp chirp...

mayhem's picture
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mayhem

IMHO, I think it works better with the target audiences. They would be familiar with the brand/logo. No explanation needed. Although the headline is a bit difficult to read. However, it's a bit confusing for those who don't know the brand/logo. But who cares as long as it works for the target audiences:)

laylowmoe's picture
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laylowmoe

I disagree. Ads are mass communication - as in, MASS. Which brand doesn't want to, or can afford to survive without, expanding their market? This doesn't mean watering down their message - but it does mean that, let's say, you're selling to edgy, rebellious teens, a 30-something should see your ad and think "wow, sure looks cool to be an edgy rebellious teen of today, hmm, maybe I can relive it by buying this product".

me thinks's picture
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me thinks

i didn't cared to read...

SlimRich's picture
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SlimRich

nonsense...

Boxey's picture
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Boxey

too hard to read.